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just a bunch of old shoes...a cherished childhood memory

By evilsqueendee
4
written 1/27/06 9:45 AM, published 1/27/06 9:45 AM
they are just a bunch of old shoes i keep in a bag on the top shelf of an unused closet. i don't go there much anymore, but i thought for this assignment i could muster the courage.

these shoes are special to me because every september, since i was six, i would get a new pair.

sometimes, i couldn't wait to go shopping for them and other times i couldn't wait for it to be over.

when i was a teenager, the shoes seemed to take so much from me that i didn't want them anymore. that was when i put them on that shelf in the closet for the first time.

later in life, as i got older, these same shoes began to take on a new meaning for me and i began to see them as tools of my trade. i put them on again and i was able to make a living wearing these shoes.

it wasn't long in the scheme of this thing we call life that i took off  those shoes for the last time. i never wore them again and they sat there in the bag on the shelf in the closet for the longest time patiently waiting for me to find my way back to them.

and then it happened, there came the day when my babies had grown to be little girls of the same age i had been when i recieved my first pair of these special shoes.

i returned to the closest and rescued my shoes from their exiled existance. again they served me well and i taught my children everything i had learned in those shoes.

my babies are grown with babies of their own, and the shoes are back in the bag on the shelf in the closet still waiting patiently for me to return.

maybe this assignment will bring them back one more time to find their way into the heart of another generation.
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  • lilbit
    4
    This was a really good story Dee, I love all the dance shoes!

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  • I had a childhood friend who had the same love/hate relationship with dance. I can still remember seeing the horrible blisters and calluses on her feet. Nice story and pix.

    - blow.....hard

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  • I know nothing about Dance but it was Tap and Ballet? Nice story Dee!!

    - Still a Moose

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  • RobinG
    3
    Great story and neat pics. Thanks for sharing :o)

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  • neat story, Dee--those shoes have seen a lot, haven't they?

    - here and there

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  • debora
    4
    Nice, real... story. love the tap photo.

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  • very well told.

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  • Lidljo
    5
    Very interesting post and the pictures are well done. It shows the work you put in to dance.

    - Flowers are happiness...

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  • MrWiz
    2
    Well done...Nice photos..

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  • Great story. I loved the thumbnail. Wish it had been bigger.

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  • Very nice story and photos. I bet your grandchildren will find the magic in your shoes!

    - Run Bubba Run!

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  • Wonderful Story,Dee... Thanks For Sharing!!

    - NATURE RULES!!!

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  • good pics....great shadows

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  • love the prose and pics.....thanks for sharing

    - ummmm

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  • Like the way you presented your story...dramatic flair to go with the dance shoes. Thanks

    - Blessings

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  • hey mom i guess i have walked (danced) in your shoes!!!!!

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  • KayN
    5
    I loved reading your story, and the shoe pics are great! Too bad they can't talk......

    - Ms.N

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