the pictures are so-so...but that's not why I'm commenting. I wanted to say that your story would flow better if you changed the "DESCRIPTION_HERE" to words of your choice. For example, in your sentence "i was annoyed when i noticed that the administration didn't follow the DESCRIPTION_HERE rule and just let the guy smoke a pipe on school grounds....." it would flow much better if you took "DESCRIPTION HERE" out and entered "the rule", that way your sentence would include the popup link instead of DESCRIPTION HERE. QUick note: sometimes I type faster than my brain can process what I'm typing. If any of that doesn't make sense, let me know... :)

No worries...it's actually not as confusing as you think. You did everything correctly, including using the drop down list to choose your keywords. By default, the web site enters the text for all pictures inserted into stories as "DESCRIPTION HERE" To change it, all you have to do is then click into where you are writing your story, and delete DESCRIPTION HERE and type in whatever you want that would maintain the flow of your story. I didn't realize this was your first story either. Trust me: you did a lot better than most first timers :)

Welcome,,,,,,must agree about previewing.......you did good the first time.....as for the smoking on the grounds...should have been made to follow the rules.

Welcome aboard! That really is a great looking horse.

thanks everyone....and pyro, ill keep that advice in mind!!!! and i did try previewing, but i didn't know what i did wrong the first time i did it, i wouldn't know the second time i went back. so thanks for the advice everyone!