Rain in the evening

By jellybean written 5/26/06 4:23 PM, published 5/26/06 4:23 PM

I found this poem right after I took these photos.  We had just had a short but intense thunder storm.  Enjoy and let me know what you think.  

Rain (II)

      It thundered as if it would  Popup Linkrain;
Appeared sultry as if to feign;
The Sky was clear but blue-black now;
It looked as if the  Popup Linkrain would come!

The clouds were dense and moved slowly;
Lightning patterned the Sky fiercely;
The Wind was almost absent now;
It looked as if the Popup Linkrain  would come!

The Birds were quiet and nested;
Awaiting the downpour, they rested;
The Monsoon was active for now;
It looked as if the Popup Linkrain would come!

A few droplets of rain did fall;
Atop the heads of people on stroll;
Afraid, each hurried to his home;
It looked as if the Rain would come!

The Rain did come! The Rain did come!
For once rightly, the Rain did come!

Dr John Celes  

extra for color: Popup Linkcolor1
                        Popup Linkcolor2



 
  • smalltown05
    Love the rain shots. Good rich color and the drops really pop.

    - blow.....hard

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  • debora
    Rain! What a great post. Great composition, clarity and color.

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  • ROCKADEE
    Excellent Shots!

    - NATURE RULES!!!

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  • jimmyneutron
    Great shots...it is always fun to shot after the rain.

    - Smile!

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  • Anonymous Hero
    Wonderful post...excellent shots...detail is awesome!

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  • KayN
    Awesome work, Dena! Hard to pick a fav....the clarity, color and comp is wonderful on all shots!

    - Ms.N

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  • Lidljo
    Very nice! Lovely poem and pictures.

    - Flowers are happiness...

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  • BusyB1965
    The rain drops sure add the extra sparkle to the pictures....Like the poem you presented.

    - Blessings

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  • Pablo57
    Excellent photos and poem presentation

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  • Mike H
    nice macros, i was waiting for the drop........ to drop

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  • bugaboo
    Beautiful raindrops, and the DOF on color 1 & 2 is fantastic!

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