The House We Will Make..

By pixiehopper8 written 7/23/07 2:14 AM, published 7/23/07 2:14 AM

Tags: house

OK, so i decided to write a story and see if i could get some feedback on my pictures. These pictures are from a project i did on my son and his father. I'm very proud with how they turned out, but could use any comments on what might make my work better! Thanks! :) OK, so i decided to write a story and see if i could get some feedback on my pictures. These pictures are from a project i did on my son and his father. I'm very proud with how they turned out, but could use any comments on what might make my work better! Thanks! :)

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pixiehopper8
7/23/07 2:29 AM

sorry it posted two times. :(

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enigmaticfaerie
•6
7/23/07 6:44 AM

Welcome! (and it's ok, an editor has fixed it) The shots themselves are beautiful. Great compositions and tones, however whatever you used to scan them in made them fuzzy and is distracting. But I really *love* the compositions. You did a great job documenting your son and his father.

- Film-Junkie 4 Life!

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Penny
•7
7/23/07 7:49 AM

I like the layouts of the shots. The focus was the only thing that I had an issue with.

- Smile

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buggin
•3
7/23/07 7:57 AM

I would agree with Penny and EMF, but the set is emotional and I love the borders...

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pixiehopper8
7/23/07 9:53 AM

Thank you so much!

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jess
•3
7/23/07 10:24 AM

Great post, great comp, just work a bit on the focus...Big Welcome!

- "north is that way"

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pixiehopper8
7/23/07 10:37 AM

I think part of the focus thig is the fact that my lens is broken. i just try to work around it the best i can.

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MRQUACKERS
•5
7/23/07 10:58 AM

Welcome to photographica.

- A quack with an camera

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pixiehopper8
7/23/07 5:30 PM

Thank you!

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msjudi
•3
7/23/07 6:40 PM

welcome... i love your thumb... Also you have some priceless shots here of father and son... well done..

- Smile ; )

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liquidpulp
•4
7/23/07 11:15 PM

great capture of images.. the emotions that you render here are priceless.. great job!

- take a pic it last longer

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BEARPHOTO
•3
7/24/07 10:20 PM

Welcome to Photographica. Good job for a broken lens and the moments and expressions are wonderful. The poloroid effect is good. The wild hair and son sleeping are my favorites.

- Light warms the heart...

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boyhidingintree
•4
7/25/07 5:19 AM

Welcome! I absolutely love these! I agree they could be a little sharper, but you did a great job with a broken lens. Can't wait to see more!

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pixiehopper8
7/25/07 11:25 AM

again, thank you everyone!

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jojames1
•5
7/25/07 2:03 PM

Very artistic. I'm in on the focus thing....but you'll see a bunch of us are sticklers on that one, so nothing personal. I would probably post no more than five photos per story. Unfortunately I totally skipped over your post yesterday because I was in a hurry and didn't have time to open them all. Just a tip. Of course, you can post as many as you think completes your story.

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Blizzard
•4
7/26/07 9:54 AM

I love all of these as is. I dig the soft focus. I wouldn't sharpen them at all.

- I want to pull your teeth

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pixiehopper8
7/26/07 10:36 AM

Thats how i felt about them too. Me and my sons father are no longer together, and the pictures and the soft focus give it that empty feeling. that might make you understand why they are the was thay are.

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