Bi-Weekly Challenge: composition & focus

By msjudi

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written 1/12/08 5:03 PM, published 1/13/08 6:19 AM

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jeffrey
•4
1/12/08 5:16 PM

cool pics...

- believe...

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bullshoalsview
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1/12/08 5:16 PM

You are doing so well with the sepia tones here lately! This ship shot is spectacular! I like the foreground and background for the cannon, but would have moved it right or left, not dead center...but the tone in it is really good, and snow is hard!!!

- Run Bubba Run!

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Lidljo
•5
1/12/08 5:25 PM

I agree with bullshoalview. I really like the tone, composition, and sharpness of the first shot.

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smalltown05
•5
1/12/08 5:30 PM

What BSV said! Cannon would be fantastic with a little better composition.

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msjudi
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1/12/08 5:38 PM

there were way too many distractions on the left and right of the cannon, leaving me no choice but to center it... ... I appreciate all your advice and great comments...

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CanonFodder
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1/12/08 6:19 PM

The ship is awesome! Cannons rule!

- My "kids"!

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Marguarita
1/12/08 7:06 PM

I love the abandoned ship! Where did you see this? I envy your traveks and the amazing pictures they generate! Keep up the great work, We may see a showing of your work someday in an art gallery! :) Love, Reets

- Be happy

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lorenrose
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1/12/08 7:23 PM

Cannon for me

- vern

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The Old Guy
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1/12/08 7:32 PM

Nice subjects, good work. I have to agree with the comments on the cannon. Try cropping a bunch off the left side. I think you will like the results.

- So shoot already!!

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msjudi
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1/12/08 7:47 PM

Now i see what you meant about doing a crop on the cannon... here it is CROPPEDcannon what do you think????

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bullshoalsview
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1/12/08 7:53 PM

That's IT!!!! I like the comp now so much better, it is much more interesting and has a better focal point! Nice cropping!

- Run Bubba Run!

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msjudi
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1/12/08 7:55 PM

thank you... i like it too! i was not sure at first what you meant with cropping until i went back and figured it out! ;)

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The Old Guy
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1/12/08 8:01 PM

You nailed it msjudi. You naile it.

- So shoot already!!

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Ashton
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1/12/08 9:01 PM

I like both of these!

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fuzzy1
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1/12/08 9:15 PM

The ship is wonderful...

- f8 and be there...

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bugaboo
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1/13/08 2:28 AM

Sensational!!

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KayN
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1/13/08 3:43 AM

Great job, Judi! Crop made a world of difference in the cannon shot!

- Ms.N

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Penny
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1/13/08 6:46 AM

These are fantastic. The ship is fantastic. I really like the cannon after the crop. You did a great job on this post

- Smile

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MaggieMae
1/13/08 6:49 AM

Beautiful pictures! Thanks

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smalltown05
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1/13/08 7:36 AM

Crop is better. Glad you figured it out.

- blow.....hard

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DCDave
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1/13/08 8:17 AM

Great photos!

- DFaith

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Swat
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1/13/08 9:52 AM

Such an excellent pics !!!

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Mike H
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1/13/08 12:53 PM

Like these shots very much. Keep em coming. When your Hot your Hot

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BEARPHOTO
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1/13/08 2:47 PM

Ship and cropped cannon in sepia are excellent....clap,clap,clap.

- Light warms the heart...

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surferguy
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1/14/08 4:15 AM

WoooooHoooo

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