I like the bus shot and the angle on it, I wish it was clearer. The batmobile is also out of focus and I don't think the red background really works in either of the last two shots.
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I actually really liked the red... but then it reminded me of redscale film and seeing as I'm currently in love with the way it looks with urban shots I guess I'm fair judge. I agree that the focus is kind of... wonky in the bus shot. I'm still trying to wrap my head around what's in and what's out of focus on that shot. But I like the comp. I also love that all three are toys, yet without the scale you wouldn't know how big they are without that reference.
I found the focus on the batmobile, but have to supplement Paul's first assertion that it's out of focus. Although it's not, it's just not a great focal point (preferably I'd prefer more dof with the same focal point). All those things add up to the last being my favorite :-D
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Nothing wrong with a different focal point, but when that point doesn't stand out and you're left searching for it (because another element grabs the eyes attention first) it creates a less than settling picture.
I think for playing around with a macro for the first time you've done a great job. More dof would have really made these better.
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I like the bus shot and the angle on it, I wish it was clearer. The batmobile is also out of focus and I don't think the red background really works in either of the last two shots.
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dito! very neat and creative.....keep posting!
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I actually really liked the red... but then it reminded me of redscale film and seeing as I'm currently in love with the way it looks with urban shots I guess I'm fair judge. I agree that the focus is kind of... wonky in the bus shot. I'm still trying to wrap my head around what's in and what's out of focus on that shot. But I like the comp. I also love that all three are toys, yet without the scale you wouldn't know how big they are without that reference.
I found the focus on the batmobile, but have to supplement Paul's first assertion that it's out of focus. Although it's not, it's just not a great focal point (preferably I'd prefer more dof with the same focal point). All those things add up to the last being my favorite :-D
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I agree on the focus problems - maybe a bit smaller aperature for more dof would help.
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I never said in the description, but it was when I first got my new camera, and I was playing around with the macro setting.
I just thought that having the focal point somewhere unexpected and unconventional would be quite cool.
After all, I'm sure you've all learned I'm somewhat unconventional, anyway.
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Nothing wrong with a different focal point, but when that point doesn't stand out and you're left searching for it (because another element grabs the eyes attention first) it creates a less than settling picture.
I think for playing around with a macro for the first time you've done a great job. More dof would have really made these better.
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Thanks for the tips :)
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going to have to agree with the others. Keep playing around.
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I like the bus shot; the others, no.
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