Practice Makes Perfect

By Escape Artist
4
written 10/11/08 2:55 PM, published 10/11/08 2:56 PM

 Since the age of 4 until about 14 or so I was obsessed with Futbol. I refused to call it Soccer for years when I found out that everywhere else in the world it was known as Futbol. Between Futbol, Martial Arts and Skateboarding I was always outside or on the go. The two shots below, 'Practice' and 'Empty Futbol Field' was where I used to play and practice when I lived in Durham. I spent many hours there working on drills and conditioning.

*These shots are about 3 years old...my glasses broke so I'm back to archived shots.*

Practice

 Empty Futbol Field


 You gotta have something to replenish your energy.

 SOBE



 
  • kwsNI
    3

    Hate to say it, but these aren't up to your usual standards.  The fields both lack any real subject; which might work if you wanted them to feel desolate, but they're too busy for that.  

    Also, the sky is a bit too oversaturated.  You can get by with oversaturating the blue sky, but you also lost the top half of the clouds in the sky with it.  

    On a positive note, it's great to see B&W photos that have black and white in them.  Too many bad B&W photos don't have black and white, just shades of gray.  Good job in all 3 on getting the full range in there. 

    - Contumelious

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  • I like them and I like the fact that they look desolate. wouldn't have worked in color to get that desolate feeling.   

    - desert flower

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  • These pretty much lack a focal point.  But I agree with kwsNI in that they do have a good range of white to black. 

    - blow.....hard

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  • Penny
    7

    My first thought when I looked at them was "Wow you have came a long way".  I think Aaron covered everything I was going to say.  You have definately developed a style.  In these shots you do not have that style yet...

    - Smile

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  • nope...but i liked them and wanted to share them...

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