Wishes & Crabs

By Ashton
3
written 10/6/08 7:55 AM, published 10/6/08 7:55 AM

When I go crabbing
I'm always wishing
Some crab will be my prize;
But while I'm crabbing,
The crab are wishing
   Otherwise.

And all the wishes
Of all the crabs
Seem always to come true;
So all my wishes
To catch some crabs
   Never do.



 
  • I like the repitition in the composition. I like how it looks as if the one side will soon fall over!

    - american[bohemian] style

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  • Penny
    7

    I like this shot a lot. Not a huge fan of the frame though.  To me it gives a look like you took a photo of someones photo.

    - Smile

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  • Wonderful shot,

    Original poem?

    - A quack with an camera

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  • Nice Ashton. Well composed shot. ;)

    - Beauty in all

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  • I love it!

    - come over for lunch

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  • Nice image Ashton!! ..,. Would like to have seen a little more detail in the shadows without blowing out the highlights ... A great poem too!! ... Well Done!!

    - Out of Focus!!

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  • Ashton
    3

    Thanks all for your input. After numerous attempts to find a poem about crabbing I proceeded to plagiarize the original written my the well known author "Anon".

    When I go fishing
    I'm always wishing
    Some fish will be my prize;
    But while I'm fishing,
    The fish are wishing
    Otherwise.

    And all the wishes
    Of all the fishes
    Seem always to come true;
    So all my wishes
    To catch some fishes
    Never do.

    - Say...CHEESE

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