It's obvious you like to shoot flowers. I think you need to work on some basic composition though. In the first two the orientation is wrong. You need to flip to vertical. The grass going sideways is very distracting. In my opinion, all of the photos need to be cropped tighter so your main subject fills the frame more. The shot with the bee looks like it would be pretty good if you changed it to vertical and brought what would become the right edge in next to the bloom, and bring the top down. It looks like you may have been going for the rule of thirds in flower 18, but the petal is cut off on the main bloom, and the rest of the plant isn't interesting enough to justify being included. On flower 19, the sky and yard don't add anything to the shot, so crop right up next to the bloom and you'll have a stronger image. The same type of crop work would benefit the last 3 shots too, as well as your 'daisys in the wind shot'. You don't need the empty space on the left. The wind made it a little out of focus too.
Keep up the enthusiasm, and work on filling the frame and I think you'll be surprised at how much better your images will be.
The pirate has some good advise. Therefore, I like the empty spaces in blowing. I also noticed that allot of the shots were a little bright. Not burned out, just 'faded'.
It's obvious you like to shoot flowers. I think you need to work on some basic composition though. In the first two the orientation is wrong. You need to flip to vertical. The grass going sideways is very distracting. In my opinion, all of the photos need to be cropped tighter so your main subject fills the frame more. The shot with the bee looks like it would be pretty good if you changed it to vertical and brought what would become the right edge in next to the bloom, and bring the top down. It looks like you may have been going for the rule of thirds in flower 18, but the petal is cut off on the main bloom, and the rest of the plant isn't interesting enough to justify being included. On flower 19, the sky and yard don't add anything to the shot, so crop right up next to the bloom and you'll have a stronger image. The same type of crop work would benefit the last 3 shots too, as well as your 'daisys in the wind shot'. You don't need the empty space on the left. The wind made it a little out of focus too.
Keep up the enthusiasm, and work on filling the frame and I think you'll be surprised at how much better your images will be.
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The pirate has some good advise.
Therefore, I like the empty spaces in blowing.
I also noticed that allot of the shots were a little bright. Not burned out, just 'faded'.
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Agree wiht the Pirate as well!! really like "blowing" cool shot!!
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seems the pirate just might be right on the mark as far as I can tell..I like the color of the flower in 26
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